Bitter Fruits

Here's a thing I've been doing lately. These are the crops from page one from something called Bitter Fruits of the Rotten Romance. It's kind of personal. And has animal metaphor. And it's pretty much girly. Almost everything I dislike, but people change, eventually.
Everyone can see that nothing good is going to happen to that unfortunate fox-lady, so I just may have to make some changes in the script as it goes.
The whole page is on  http://besnglist.deviantart.com/art/Bitter-Fruits-pg1-199940302,  because it's too large for a simple blog. And will be continued.